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uppityperson

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1. Do you want nitpicking? I can nitpick and interesting reading.

Reply to w8liftinglady (Original post)

Sat Mar 29, 2014, 07:11 PM

Mar 2014

Is this what you want, or content or how it flows? I can nitpick.

Un-cap Epilepsy and Units in first sentence.

End of 1st paragraph SUDEP should have the longer words with SUDEP in parenthesis followed by use of acronym. I see it defined in the first sentence of paragraph 2 though.

"Pacemakers for the brain. Uncap pacemakers or is this standard?

1st paragraph "Level Four treatment centers", later is "Level Four Center" and "Level Four center", match caps throughout.

post-itcal and postitcally

Epilepsy Patients, uncap after Conclusions begins, or cap all.

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And yay for nurses! Good job and hope you get published.

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Do you want nitpicking? I can nitpick and interesting reading. uppityperson Mar 2014 #1